Quick Story Pilot
((I'm gonna write a story and you know how people make pilots before they make a TV show to see if other people like it? I decided to do that for my sotyr...which still doesn't have a title, Fenrir, Kajin, Seleke, Aikou, and Ark are all © to Sobou Sachiriku ((me))
Aikou started to speak,
"Could you tell me if there are two people by the names of Fenrir and Kajin Kumori enrolled here?"
"Of course," The auburn haired woman started to type at her key board, "And how would 'Kumori' be spelled?"
"K-U-M-O-R-I."
She typed some more and Aikou drummed her fingers on the desk, Ark, her little brother, was bearly tall enough to get his chin over the desk, him being only eleven. After ten minutes the woman finally spoke,
"Kumori, Fenrir and Kajin. Yes, they're here..."
"Great!" Aikou exclaimed, "Could we see them please? It's on...well, personal matters."
"...Oh, I'm sorry sweetie, but Kajin is currently in the hospital, and Fenrir won't be seeing any visitors for a while..."
"Hospital? Is he alright?"
"He's fine, just a little accident with some explosives, nothing to worry about, goodbye."
"But, I need to speak with them! It's an emergency!"
The woman stood and walked around her desk, placing her hand in the small of Aikou's back and leading her out the door,
"I'll make sure to tell Ms. Hades you dropped by, good bye children." Aikou took Ark by the wrist and stormed out of the building. Once they were down the street a bit Aikou began to speak,
"What kind of corporation is that? Doesn't let two kids see their older siblings."
"...Kajin's hurt isn't he?" Ark asked,
"I dunno,"
"What do you mean you don't know?"
"I don't know, he did something with explosives that got him in the hospital."
Ark went silent as they turned down an alley, "We've gotta do something,"
"No Ark, there's nothing we can do..."
"Aikou, Seleke's gone missing, we live in an abandoned church and we don't even know why Kajin's in the hospital of the friggin Gloriossa Building, something gotta be done!"
Aikou stopped walking and confronted her younger brother "Well what do you expect I do Arkelect?"
"You decide, you're a tenth degree black belt in stealth Aikou, you can enter a room and go unnoticed for twenty minutes, and you blend into darkness perfectly. I can hack into any computer on Gaia, I have an I.Q. of 165 and I'm eleven years old, what do you think we should do?"
Aikou stood silently looking at her brother for a minute before speaking, "I've gotta break into the Gloriossa building."
"You've gotta break into the Gloriossa Building, now c'mon we've got lots of planning to do."
Aikou started to speak,
"Could you tell me if there are two people by the names of Fenrir and Kajin Kumori enrolled here?"
"Of course," The auburn haired woman started to type at her key board, "And how would 'Kumori' be spelled?"
"K-U-M-O-R-I."
She typed some more and Aikou drummed her fingers on the desk, Ark, her little brother, was bearly tall enough to get his chin over the desk, him being only eleven. After ten minutes the woman finally spoke,
"Kumori, Fenrir and Kajin. Yes, they're here..."
"Great!" Aikou exclaimed, "Could we see them please? It's on...well, personal matters."
"...Oh, I'm sorry sweetie, but Kajin is currently in the hospital, and Fenrir won't be seeing any visitors for a while..."
"Hospital? Is he alright?"
"He's fine, just a little accident with some explosives, nothing to worry about, goodbye."
"But, I need to speak with them! It's an emergency!"
The woman stood and walked around her desk, placing her hand in the small of Aikou's back and leading her out the door,
"I'll make sure to tell Ms. Hades you dropped by, good bye children." Aikou took Ark by the wrist and stormed out of the building. Once they were down the street a bit Aikou began to speak,
"What kind of corporation is that? Doesn't let two kids see their older siblings."
"...Kajin's hurt isn't he?" Ark asked,
"I dunno,"
"What do you mean you don't know?"
"I don't know, he did something with explosives that got him in the hospital."
Ark went silent as they turned down an alley, "We've gotta do something,"
"No Ark, there's nothing we can do..."
"Aikou, Seleke's gone missing, we live in an abandoned church and we don't even know why Kajin's in the hospital of the friggin Gloriossa Building, something gotta be done!"
Aikou stopped walking and confronted her younger brother "Well what do you expect I do Arkelect?"
"You decide, you're a tenth degree black belt in stealth Aikou, you can enter a room and go unnoticed for twenty minutes, and you blend into darkness perfectly. I can hack into any computer on Gaia, I have an I.Q. of 165 and I'm eleven years old, what do you think we should do?"
Aikou stood silently looking at her brother for a minute before speaking, "I've gotta break into the Gloriossa building."
"You've gotta break into the Gloriossa Building, now c'mon we've got lots of planning to do."
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